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Let’s create a poem together

August 4, 2005

I’ll start with a line below. You add the next line in a comment to this post. Every so often I will update the poem with the lines you have posted so far.

Ok, here goes…


Apples disintegrate,
Technical decomposition, noticed too late.
Would you care to speculate?
For from this pointed place
your eyes blow by my face
I cannot grow seeds of faith.


Nice job all! Poem is closed as of now!

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6 comments

  1. disintegrate


  2. Technical decomposition, noticed too late


  3. Would you care to speculate?


  4. For from this pointed place


  5. your eyes blow by my face


  6. I cannot grow seeds of faith



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